Dear Tricky,
How is everything in New Orleans?
I just start my semester in Nanning.I am in a new class------Class 7 Grade 7 now.My favourite subject is English.Miss Liang is my English teacher.She is very beautiful and nice.I love her very much and now I'm very good at English.
Yesterday I had a very happy English lesson.The teacher was Miss Liang of Grade 9.The lesson was about a trip to the zoo.Miss Liang told us many things about animals.I loved listen to her and I had very good time.
That's all for my semester in Nanning.What about you?Can you tell me about your semester in the United States?
Your Chinese pen friend,
Janice
初一:郑嘉慧
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