英语高分作文：给父母的一封信
dear mom and dad,
it has been two weeks since i last wrote to you. i am so sorry that i don‘t write you very often.
however, i have been busy with my preparation
for the final exams. as you know, i‘m coming home on jan.14th. but before that, i have to take the final exams for all six classes i‘m taking this semester. recently i have been in and out of the library a lot to do some research on the term paper for one of the classes. most professors gave out the review problems already so that the students can study for the final. i think i‘m doing okay studying for the final.
besides reviewing materials, i‘m also planning to host the new year party of my department. you know there are so many talented people in my communications major, but they picked me to host the party! great, isn‘t it?
well gotta go talk to you soon.
love you,
xxx
【英语高分作文：给父母的一封信】
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