I always want to go camping, because I think it is cool. But my parents think that I am too small to do it, so they refuse me. One day, I told my parents that my friends and I planned to go camping, the place was very close to my friend’s home. So my parents allowed me. I was so happy, we put up the tent and took out the food we prepared. When it was dark, we set the fire and we song and dance, we played the games happily. Before we slept, I laid on the tent and talked secret with my friends. This is the first time for me to go camp and I enjoy it so much.
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