My home is a very good family, I have a lovely brother, his name is He Chengke and he likes to ride a bike and playing computer games, sometimes would rather ride a bike to have a meal, but his hobby is different, and I I like writing and surfing the Internet, sometimes I sing a song, if you are my music teacher, listen to my songs, that you will feel to choose the wrong line, this is very bad. My father is an English teacher, he likes swimming and watching movies, but he is very lazy, always unconsciously when to eat, all want to let you pull voice call before he came to. My mother is a teacher, she and I are in the same school class, is a Chinese and English teacher, or a coach, she likes watching TV, dancing and playing basketball, but she is very hard-working, always take care of me and my brother and father's life. My grandpa is a cleaner, my grandma is grandpa ' 'assistant', they are very hardworking, always keep the streets clean clean, grandpa still won a prize of excellent cleaner! He likes to listen to songs, grandma, too, they are very love me, and I really like their smile, because can .
So I have a dream, that is, when a singer, to write a song of praise cleaner, let grandma and grandpa smile more full.
六年级:贺怡萍
写作思路解析
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