One day,the sun is shining.My parents and I are visiting my grandma’s farm.
The farm is very beautiful.Because there are many flowers on it.They are colorful.
‘Nay-nay.’What can you hear? I can hear some horses.They are very strong.They are eating hay now.
The pig are lazy.They are in the pen.The pigs always eat and sleep.
Grandmasays‘Don’t pick flowers.Because the flowers can make the farm beautiful!’Wecan’t litter.Please put the rubbish in the rubbish bin.
Today we are happy.My grandma is happy too.
四年级:樱知千奈美
立意温和正向，不刻意拔高主题，借助细腻生动的动作描写来还原人物状态自然传递思考，字里行间流淌着不加修饰的真情实感，很容易触动读者内心。观点贴合普通人生活体验，真实不悬浮。道理娓娓道来，没有生硬说教感。
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