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写人物的作文英语

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2025-10-17 09:36:35

写人物的作文英语

写景物的作文有很多,同样的,也有很多写人的作文。写人物的'作文英语,我们来看看下文。

写人物的作文英语一

My name is Wu Yuwei .I’m 13 years old. I’m a Chinese girl .I study in Xinqi PrimarySchool.I’m in Cla3,Grade 6. I’m in Row 3. I have many friends in class.For example, Che Lei is my best friend . She is 13 years old , too. She is a good girl. We often help each other.There are four people in my family .They are my father, mother, sister and me .My parents are formers . They work hard. My sister is a student . I love them and they love me ,too.

Everyone has his favorite teacher ,so do I. My favourite teacher is MiWei, our English teacher. We felt English very difficuit when we began to study English. MiWei had a good idea to solve the problem. One day, MiWei came into the classroom with some fruits, such as apples,bananas,and oranges. She said: “Today we are going to learn the names of the fruits. You can eat the fruits if you can tell me their names in English . ”All the students listened carefully and studied hard . Someone even stood up to answer questions. Clawas over ,and the fruits were all eaten. From then on ,I am more and more interested in English, and I want to say from my heart: “ Thank you, MiWei!”

Mr. Wang is my PE teacher. He is very tall and strong. He’s a bit fat. His skin is swarthy, but it looks healthy. He has a round face. There are two big eyes on his face. He always wears a pair of glasses. I think Mr. Wang is very handsome.

Our PE lessons are very interesting, because Mr. Wang is very humor. He always plays games with us. Sometimes he makes jokes with us. We feel very happy in PE lessons. We all like Mr. Wang.

Teacher a very great jod,英语人物作文,英语作文大全《英语人物作文》。I want to be a teacher too。

Our English Teacher is a beautiful woman。 She is very kind to our。In the school, she always let us memorize the much too words and grammer。I even hate our English teacher It makes me feel English is very boring!I have no tiam to do something I like。But on last end-of-year's exam,I got a really good grade。

Now I know teachers is really good for us!Finally I want to say:"thank you teachers !"

写人物的作文英语二

My father is a gentle man

My father has small eyes,Wear a pair of glasses,looking more gently,the daddy's hair are not many, he said "the intelligent head does not grow hair",daddy does the management, but daddy usually ever not talk bureaucratically to others, therefore his personal connection is specially good,is the same as me.daddy speaks always extremely temperately,never say hit the person,curse at people are also few,calculated scolded people not to be big, although sometimes also can be angry for a longtime,but just only about one day,could no surpain one day-long.

He usually educate me that the person must to be honestly,friendly to other,and working diligently.

This is my father, I love him forever.

My father has small eyes,Wear a pair of glasses,looking more gently,the daddy‘s hair are not many, he said the intelligent head does not grow hair,daddy does the management, but daddy usually ever not talk bureaucratically to others, therefore his personal connection is specially good,is the same as me.daddy speaks always extremely temperately,never say hit the person,curse at people are also few,calculated scolded people not to be big, although sometimes also can be angry for a longtime,but just only about one day,could no surpain one day-long.

He usually educate me that the person must to be honestly,friendly to other,and working diligently.This is my father, I love him forever.

【写人物的作文英语】

写作思路解析

能够感受到写作时的用心,作者善用层层深入的层层渲染强化情感浓度塑造场景,素材寻常朴素,却能挖掘出悠长意蕴,小事件写出大感悟,文字充满温度。场景刻画生动逼真,仿佛身临其境。作者善于感知生活中的细微情绪,把内心感受转化为流畅文字,文风温和治愈。

本文范文仅作写作思路参考,请勿直接照搬抄袭用于作业投稿。

作文打分:93分(满分100)

作文优点

★段落篇幅分配均衡,不会出现极端长短段落。善于运用简单环境描写烘托气氛,丰富文章内容。

存在不足

!感悟集中堆砌在结尾,没有穿插在叙事当中,叙事与抒情割裂。缺少伏笔铺垫,前后内容关联性不强。

改进建议

↓写完文章大声朗读,找出语句不通顺、重复啰嗦的地方修改。构思时主动设计微小冲突,让叙事不再平铺直叙。

综合点评

◆文章首尾能够相互照应,结构完整性较好。叙事节奏平稳有序,没有逻辑混乱问题。心理描写稀缺,难以展现人物内心情绪波动,人物形象略显单薄扁平。

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