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英文电影观后感

79分
2025-03-11 15:16:21 智文网

Every film is famous for a reason.

I thought for a moment and decided that maybe I should write it in English to better state my point.

The Shawshank Redemption is a glamourous film. Every character in it is commendable.

Those prisoners, innocent or not ,most of therm spent two thirds of their lives in that closed damed Shawshank Prison. As Red said they've become"institutionalized". They find life meaningless outside the prison. Old Brook and Red experienced the same outside the prison. They even thought likewise: They want to go back to "where they belong ", they can't endure the life outside, in which they find themselves useless. They want to commit a crime so that they can back and they both think of suicide. Brook did commit suicide while, Red with his unrealised promise to Andy, choosed to live.

"Get busy living or get busy dying." Being insititutionalized is terrible and awful. That is a man without his own will,without his bright life, a man of no hope.

Andy crawled to light through 500 yards of shit-smelling foulness that a normal man can't even imagine. Through that unbearable 500 yards, he earned his freedom. He embraced the whole bright big outside world that he had dreamed of going back to for 20 years. He smiled in the pouring rain and lightening. That moment I saw a man of his totally free will. That scene reminds me of wallace in film Brave Heart, at the last moment of his glorious life, sceaming out "freedom". Though he died the next moment ,he still earned his freedom, his entire eternal freedom cried out with his hope for his man,his country.

As Andy said,"Hope is a good thing ,maybe the best of things, and no good thing ever dies." Hope is what leads them to a dream of freedom and finally ,to the reality of freedom.

写作思路解析

娓娓道来所见所感,运用含蓄隽永的借物抒情寄托内在心绪强化表达效果,行文从容不迫,不急不躁娓娓道来,展现出稳定的文字功底,叙事完整无残缺。叙述连贯顺畅,场景搭建完整,故事脉络清晰。作者善于还原场景细节,文字画面感充足,阅读代入感很强。

本文范文仅作写作思路参考,请勿直接照搬抄袭用于作业投稿。

作文打分:79分(满分100)

作文优点

叙事态度真诚,尊重客观事实,不刻意夸大情节。文章结构稳定,层次分明,是一篇规范合格习作。

存在不足

!部分地方过渡依赖直白连接词,缺少情景自然过渡。素材选择稳妥保守,容易和普通习作内容雷同,辨识度不高。

改进建议

完成初稿通读修改,调整语序、理顺语句。把感悟思考融入叙事全过程,不要集中堆放在结尾。打磨首尾段落,开头抓人眼球,结尾深化主题,提升文章完整质感。

综合点评

作者具备良好的观察习惯,善于捕捉生活细微瞬间。叙事完整流畅,但是段落过渡手段单一,频繁依靠简单连接词串联上下文。

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