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与理想的英语作文

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2025-11-21 16:05:40 字数:

与理想有关的英语作文

my dream

each of us has a dream ! it's colorful and different. in general, it can make us more confident

my dream is to be a doctor.as a doctor .i am supposed to help anymore who needs help. though they are poor.i will do them a favor as possible as i can .i know that people with disease need to be taken good care of .they feel more lonely than us .therefore,l would like to give them a warm hug and cheer them up to overcome the illness .i believe that if we all treat them as our friend .the world will be better .

friend.let's try our best to change the world to achieve our dreams !

what do i want to do when i’m older? someone wants to be a doctor. someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport. someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing. someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children.

i like playing the piano and i good at it. so i want to become a piano player. play the piano is very interesting. and you can learn something of music. piano can make you like music. a lot of musician and singer are love playing piano.

i play the piano when i’m ten years old. now i’m in grand five. i hope when i’m sixteen years old , i can become grand eight. i’ll be harder and harder to practise.

become a piano play is a hard job. but i believe i can do it.

i have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed: we hold these truths to be self-evident that all men are created equal.i have a dream that one day on the red hills of georgia the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slave owners will be able to sit down together at the table of brotherhood.i have a dream that one day even the state of mississippi, a state sweltering with the heat of injustice, sweltering with the heat of oppression,

will be transformed into an oasis of freedom and justice.i have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character.

i have a dream today!i have a dream that one day, down in alabama, with its vicious racists, with its governor having his lips dripping with the words of interposition and nullification; one day right down in alabama little black boys and black girls will be able to join hands with little white boys and white girls as sisters and brothers. i

have a dream today!i have a dream that one day every valley shall be exalted, and every hill and mountain shall be made low, the rough places will be made plain, and the crooked places will be made straight, and the glory of the lord shall be revealed and all flesh shall see it together.

i hope i can become a doctor in the future.i was born in a doctor's family.my parents are both doctors.they are always busy working for patients' health and have no time to look after me.they saved many people's lives during their work.the doctor is called "angles in white".because doctor may let these experience personally the human which the indisposition suffers to get rid of the pain. may let the human change the health. at the same time, i believed that, will help others, own also to be able to obtain joyfully. therefore,i wish to be a doctor like my parents.i hoped future i might be a doctor.

我希望未来的我能够成为一名医生.我出生在一个医生世家.我的父母都是医生.他们经常忙于照顾自己的`病人,没有时间来照顾我.在他们工作期间,他们挽救了许多人的生命.医生被人们称为"白衣天使".因为医生可以让那些身受病痛折磨的人摆脱痛苦。可以让人变得健康.同时,我认为,帮助了别人,自己也将会得到快乐。所以,我希望自己成为像父母一样的医生,我希望未来我可以做一个医生。

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