I got up early this morning. After breakfast I went to the beach near my home with my friends. We went there by bike. As soon as we got there， we played with the sand and walked on the beach. We also went boating.It was really fantastic. In the afternoon I went to the library and read books there. I also helped my parents make dinner. After dinner I washed the dishes. In the evening I did my homework. Then I surfed the internet. I had a busy and interesting day.
译文：我这天起床早。吃完早饭后我和兄弟姐妹们去了我家附近的海滩。咱们骑自开车去的。咱们一到那里就玩沙子，在海滩走。咱们也划船。很棒。下午我去图书馆看书。我也帮忙父母做晚饭。饭后我洗碗。晚上我做作业，然后上网。我这天很忙也过得很愉快
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