First of October is China's National Day. On that day, I celebrated it with my family members. In the morning, we all wear red and go out shopping together, then we find a place to settle our lunch. After lunch, I go to my cousin's house and play table tennis with them. In the evening, we eat our dinner which was cooked b my aunt and my mother. Then, we sitted down in front of the TV and watched the special programmes for National Day.
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