April 8th,Sunday Sunny
Last Sunday,I had a trip to Sunny farm with my classmates.It's a nice day.There are many animals in the farm.I fed a cow,a sheep,an elephant.My classmates was help farmer to do some things.At lunch ,we ate a lot of delicious food in the farmer's home. We were play games with animals in the afternoon.
I felt the trip it was the very great.
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