My name is Rose. I’m slim. I’m a little short ,too. But I think I can grow taller in the future. I have a nice and busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I usually take a piano class. So I do well in playing the piano. I often have a piano show on my weekend. I often take a dancing class with my friend on Saturday afternoon, that’s why I’m so slim. Sometimes I go shopping with my mother and my baby brother on Saturday evening. I like shopping best. Going shopping makes me relax. Every weekend, I take a shower at 8:45 p.m. I need to look after my baby brother on Sunday morning. Am I helpful? Mom says: I’m a good girl. I can help her do a lot. I always write a diary at 10 o’clock in the evening. On weekends, my mom often cooks boiled fish for me. I like it. It’s healthy and delicious. On Sunday afternoon, I must go to school by school bus. I should stay at school from Monday to Friday. I like my school days. And I also like my weekends at home. I’m happy every day.
我叫罗斯。我长得苗条，我个子不是很高。但是我想有朝一日我会长得更高的。我拥有一个愉快且忙碌的周末。在星期六早上，我通常上钢琴课，所以我的钢琴弹得很棒。我常常在周末去参加各种钢琴演出。在周六的下午，我经常和我的朋友去上舞蹈课，这就是我如此苗条的原因所在。在周六的晚上，有时我会和我的妈妈和弟弟一起去购物。我喜欢购物，购物能使我放松身心。每个周末我都是在晚上8：45分洗澡。在周日的上午，我需要照看我的小弟弟。我能干吗？妈妈常说：“我是一个好姑娘。”我可以帮她做很多事。我总是在晚上10：00写日记。在周末，我的妈妈经常会做水煮鱼给我吃。我喜欢吃水煮鱼。它们不但美味还有利于健康。在星期日下午，我必须坐校车回学校。我从星期一到星期五需要呆在学校里。我喜欢我的校园生活，也喜欢我周末在家里的日子。我每天都很快乐。
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