In order to learn the students＇,we made a survey among 100 students in our school last week.Here are the results.Fifty—form percent of students want to﹗become business men.Twenty—eight percent of students want to become doctors,to save more sick people.Twelve percent of them want to became teachers,because they want to make some children learn more knowledge.Only six percent of people want to be.writers,reporters,policemen and so on. What do you want to be when you grow up？Me？Um…When I grow up,I want to be a writer,beacuse I love writing and it can boring me a loe of henppiness.
高一:李慧琪
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