姓名:赵宇欣 班级:七年九班 联系电话:18643339247 详细地址:吉林省 延吉市 宏发小区
I have a room.It's not big,but it's really tidy.You can see a map of China on the wall.There is a big bed in my room.My quiltandpillows areon the bed.I have a bookcase is next to my bed.It is red.My books are on the bookcase.Some keys are on my desk.My computer is on my desk,too.Under my chair you can see a soccer ball ,and the chair is under the desk.This is my room.I like it very much.Do you like it?
吉林 延边 延吉市初一:赵宇欣
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