Toothers，mymumlooksordinary.Buttome，sheisthemostbeautifulmumintheworld.
Sheisstrictwithme.Sheasksmetolistencarefullyinclass.Shechecksmyhomeworkathome.WhenIshouldgotothepianoclassbutsometimesIamtiredandIdon'twanttogo，shewouldsay“Comeon，sweetie，let’sgo，Iwillgowithyou.”Thankmum，todayIcandowellbothinstudyandpianoperformance.
EverydayMumdrivesmetoschoolinthemorningandgoesbackhomeintheevening.Shealwaysgoestoseemygranniesandofferswhattheyneed.Sheteachesmehowtoloveeachother.Sheisbusybutshenevercomplains.Hersmilemakeseveryonefeelsowarm.
BothDaddyandIloveherverymuch.WhenIgrowup，Iwish，Icanbesomeoneasgoodasmymum.Sheisthemostbeautifulpersonintheworld.
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