Do you know the animals in the picture? they are white dolphins. They are very lovely, aren’t they?
White dolphins are rare animals. People seldom saw them in the past. But now people can see them in Sanniang Bay in Guangxi.
White dolphins like sea water. The water in Sanniang Bay is blue and clean, so the white dolphins can live there. People there do their best to protect them. We hope they can live there happily.
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