题目:请以“Changes in Shanghai"为题,写一篇不少于60单词的作文。
Changes in Shanghai
1 300年前的上海
2 上海的今天(东方明珠、金茂大厦)
3 上海的明天(2010年的世博会)
参考作文
Shanghai was a small town three hundred years ago. There were only a few thousand people living here. Many of them were fishermen and farmers.
300年前,上海只是个小镇,只有几千人居住在这里,其中很多人是渔民和农民。
Today, Shanghai is becoming an international city. Many tall building have been built. Some bridges have been put up over the Huangpu River. More and more foreigners come to Shanghai for a visit every day.
今天,上海已变成一座国际大都市,并建成了很多高楼大厦。黄浦江上架起了很多桥梁。每天都有越来越多的外国人前来旅游。
Shanghai has already won the bid for holding the World Expo 2010. I think the environment will be better and better and the city will be more and more beautiful.
叙事节奏拿捏得当,依托引人思索的设问手法调动读者思考串联多个场景,字里行间流淌着不加修饰的真情实感,很容易触动读者内心。场景切换流畅有序,不会杂乱无序。笔墨分配均衡,整体观感和谐统一。
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