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2026中考英语作文热点

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2025-06-08 16:51:38 智文网

    2013年中考英语作文预测:环境保护

    【摘要】2013年中考作智文目是什么呢?在中考即将来临之际,以下根据历年中考作智文目的特点,为考生提供了“2013年中考英语作文预测:环境保护”一文:

    【典型句子】

    1. It’s our duty to save water

    2. As we know , water is very important to man,

    3.we can’t live without water.

    4.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.

    5.But some people don’t care about it .

    6.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.

    Something must be done to stop the pollution.

    7. It’s our duty to protect our environment。

    8. It is very important to take care of our environment

    9. We should not throw litter onto the ground

    10. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees

    11. We should plant more flowers and trees。

    12. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin

    13. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful。

    15.Trees are very helpful and important for us.

    17.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future. It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.

    【例文】

    1.保护环境是每一个人的职责。请你写一篇以“Lower Carbon(低碳),Happier Life”为题的英语短文。短文要点如下:

    自己走路或骑自行车上学,父母骑车上班;(ride a bike, on foot)

    节约用水,用电;(save, turn off, electricity)

    将用过的课本留给低年级学生;(old books, next grade students)

    购物时带上篮子,别用塑料袋。(basket, plastic bags)

    【要求】

    1.词数:80个左右。文章开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数;

    2.必须包括全部要点,但不能逐词翻译;

    3.在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名。

   【正文】

    Lower carbon, happier life

    It’s our duty to protect the environment…………

    Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.

    It’s our duty to protect the environment. The environment is becoming worse and worse, we must do something to prevent people from polluting the environment. First, we can ride to school or go to school on foot and tell our parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps and lights in time when we don’t need them. Third, give the old books to the next grade students if we don't use them any more. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, remember to go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things.

    Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.

写作思路解析

段落排布经过斟酌,层层推进内容,利用绘声绘色的摹声绘色增强临场感受完成收尾升华,善于捕捉生活点滴小事,从平凡日常中挖掘独特写作素材。叙事循序渐进,内容稳步向前推进,不会出现逻辑跳跃。文章首尾呼应,中心统一,作者具备不错的篇章把控能力,值得研读。

本文范文仅作写作思路参考,请勿直接照搬抄袭用于作业投稿。

作文打分:86分(满分100)

改进建议

↓写完之后自查全文,筛选冗余语句删除,精简篇幅。学习以小见大写作手法,从微小事件延伸深层感悟。均衡运用多种描写方式,不要单一依靠叙事推进内容。

存在不足

!叙事过程平铺直叙,缺少情节起伏,阅读吸引力有限。细节刻画偏少,大多依靠概括语句交代事件,画面感不足。

作文优点

★具备基本的立意升华意识,结尾能够简单总结感悟。叙事条理清楚,段落划分合理,整体完成度良好。

综合点评

◆素材丰富多样,不局限于单一事例支撑观点,内容更加丰满。语句通顺,语病少见。行文缺少点睛段落,全篇没有记忆点突出的句子,读完之后印象不够深刻。

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