和爸爸猜拳英语作文
With father a finger-guessing game
Huang Jiaxin
One day, father and daughter go to a park together a finger-guessing game. They are playing sheep happy a sheep and ash too the game of the wolf! Won possibly when beautiful Yang Yang, washed-up is become grey too wolf! Result, conqueror and failure came out! Result, the daughter was defeated, father won. The daughter is laughing to say archly: "Ah! Father, you were defeated. You were defeated..
Fall in their foot, have a lot of a lot of not famous flowers, crying for them cheer! Have yellow, red, flower people in show lovely color to us.
They are really happy today!
Judge: Clear and coherent, the word is written well, wrote scene the activity that kept a person again, so, teacher one glad, you with respect to 100 minutes.
【和爸爸猜拳英语作文】
娓娓道来所见所感，运用意境悠远的寓情于景实现情感外化强化表达效果，情感表达细腻动人，情绪过渡自然流畅，没有生硬刻意之感，叙事完整无残缺。叙述连贯顺畅，场景搭建完整，故事脉络清晰。作者善于还原场景细节，文字画面感充足，阅读代入感很强。
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