英语作文我的哥哥
Li Pings brother is a PLA man. He is a handsome, tall young man with big eyes and broad shoulders.
He was born in 1971. He was a good student in school. When he was seventeen, he finished middle school. Then he joined the Peoples Liberation Army. In the army, he studied hard and took an active part in the military training. In 1991, he went to Anhui Province to help in fighting against the flood disaster. He did a lot of good deeds there.
Yesterday afternoon Li Pings brother came to our school and gave us a talk. Weve learned a lot from him.
【英语作文我的哥哥】
叙事节奏拿捏得当，依托水乳交融的情景交融升华情感表达串联多个场景，字里行间流淌着不加修饰的真情实感，很容易触动读者内心。场景切换流畅有序，不会杂乱无序。笔墨分配均衡，整体观感和谐统一。
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