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高二英语作文

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2025-10-27 15:26:31

高二英语作文

高二的英语作文有哪些呢?大家知道怎么运用已有知识写吗?下面是小编整理的高二英语作文,欢迎大家阅读参考,希望帮助到大家。

篇一:Computer

The computer is a wonderful machine. They are already widely used in industries and in universities. They are used in many ways.

Computers can do many kinds of work. For example, computers can helps us do maths problems quickly. Some problems are too hard for us to work them out, but computers can. A scientist can ask computers some questions, and the computers can answer on the screen.

In a car-factory computer tells the robots how to do with the cars.

Computers are very useful. So many parents buy computers for their children. They hope computers can help them improve their studies in school, but some children don’t do as what parents want them to do. Because they used the computers for surfing on the Internet and spend too much time playing computer games instead of learning. It does not good for their eyesight. So their parents complain about computers not help children to study but also make them fall behind.

In many companies computers instead of workers to work. So many people lose their jobs. So many workers think computers bring them a lot of trouble.

If computers are good for us or bad for us it’s hard to say so I hope computers will be used in the right way.

篇二:How to Treat Speech

People always want to learn from successful people and want to be one of them. So listening to the speech is the best way to learn from these great people and see how they get the great achievements. The famous celebrities like Bill Gate and Steve Jobs, they created the fashion and even changed the world. The common thing is that they never graduated from university, then they quit school as they studied for a while. So many young people wonder if they should follow their steps, just quit study and do what they want. The difference between these great men and normal people is thought. Even Bill Gates quit school, he still kept thinking and searching, while normal people just lie in the bed and play computer games. Everyone has different ways to get the achievement, so we need to think what is suitable for us instead of following the trend.

篇三: EBay and Alibaba

Nowadays, with the rapid development of information technology, internet and electronic commerce have been very popular in our daily lives. For example, it is fashionable for youngsters to purchase daily essentials, such as books, clothes, electrical equipment, on some famous website, like

Taobao, EBay and Alibaba, through many courier companies. As we all known, online shopping has many advantages. Firstly, online shopping is more convenient than traditional means. We can find a shop with so many goods that we may favor, while all these just need clicking our mouse and typing-in the key word of what we want to find. And it also saves our a great some of time. Secondly, more choices than real store are another attraction to customers. Online shopping can provide mass

information about products which can be suit for customer's needs, tastes, and preferences. Thirdly, as without traditional warehouses and retail shops, online shopping has can make us gain lower costs and prices. However, in spite of its advantages, we can't turn a blind eye to its

disadvantages. Obviously, quality problem is its first disadvantage.

Customers always buy fake commodities which are not described as online shops. In addition, it's troublesome and annoying for us to make a change when they are not satisfied with what we bought online. The second

disadvantage is security issues. When we shop online, we need pay for the commodities by electronic payments, but hackers can invade our

computers and steal our information, this is not safe for online shopping.

【高二英语作文】

写作思路解析

情理相融,借助动静相宜的动静结合丰富画面质感融合叙事与思考,叙事松紧控制得当,张弛交替,避免全程单调平铺直叙,读完回味悠长。叙事与感悟相互交融,读完留有充足思考空间。文字温和有深度,不会浅尝辄止,具备反复品读价值。

本文范文仅作写作思路参考,请勿直接照搬抄袭用于作业投稿。

作文打分:88分(满分100)

改进建议

↓构思结尾时循序渐进升华,避免感悟突兀生硬。多练习细节描写,训练捕捉画面、还原场景的写作能力。

存在不足

!不少段落开头缺少过渡引导,上下文跳转生硬。构思角度较为传统,缺少新颖独特的切入点。

作文优点

★语言表达干净利落,极少冗余废话,表意精准。段落过渡意识较好,能够使用自然语句串联上下文,整篇文章浑然一体,割裂感较弱。

综合点评

◆全文思路连贯统一,段落划分规整,行文没有明显卡顿。素材选取贴合题意,不会偏离写作方向。不足之处在于行文缺少节奏起伏,通篇风格平缓,很难抓住读者注意力。

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