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高一英语作文:ThankyouTeachers

78分
2025-10-27 13:20:54

高一英语作文:Thank you Teachers

Tomorrow is Teachers' Day. It's my day and the day of my many many inspiring teachers who've touched my heart during my school days.

1.Ms Lim T H, who forgave my silly mistakes.

2.Mrs Mary Tan, who allowed me to learn at my own pace and making a joke out of it when she knew i copied my A Maths Homework.

3.Mdm Chee, who loved me like a daughter and gave me the hug that i needed.

4.Mrs Sun, who loved the subject she was teaching and tried to make us like it in her own funny way.

5. Ms Mariam Tan, who was strict, cranky, small in size yet big in voice. But we love her nonetheless, without her, I'll not get a pass with distinction in LCCI.

6. Ms Kris Chong, who was like a friend. There's nothing we couldn't talk about.

7. Mrs Sim, who loved us so much, yet allowed us to blame her for not following up when in fact she was pregnant and didn't want to disrupt our O Levels.

8. Mr Lim T S, my old friend who has all the faith in me, always giving me his wise words. I miss not having him around in school to keep a look out for me.

Dear teachers, thank you so much. There ain't words suitable to express my thanks to you.

To all my other teachers, it doesn't make me love you less even if your name is not on the list.

You did your part to touch me as well.

写作思路解析

叙事视角平和客观,搭配条理顺畅的因果叙述理清内在关联增添文字温度,意境悠远耐人品读,文字构建出独特氛围,氛围感浓厚。不强行说教,以故事自然传递想法。文风从容淡定,适合偏向理性记叙、感悟类作文。

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作文打分:78分(满分100)

综合点评

整篇习作条理分明,层次安排合理,首尾呼应到位。情感依托真实事件抒发,避免空洞抒情。部分段落详略失衡,次要内容占用篇幅较多,削弱核心情节表现力。

改进建议

段落之间增加自然过渡,避免上下文跳转生硬。持续积累个性化素材,形成独属于自己的写作素材库。

存在不足

!开篇吸引力不足,铺垫冗长。全文缺少冲突变化,叙事平淡,阅读趣味性不足。

作文优点

观察能力出色,留意生活中容易被忽略的细节,转化为写作素材。内容真实接地气,脱离空洞范文套路,拥有属于自己的文字特色。

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