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我的暑假生活英文日记

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2025-10-15 08:47:33

我的暑假生活英文日记范文

1.My Summer Vacation -我的暑假生活

After the final examination, I received a letter from my uncle and aunt who invited me to stay with them for a fortnight. They live in the countryside near a beautiful mountain. The news brought me a restless night. Next morning, after almost a day's ride on the bus I reached their home and I was kindly received by them. They prepared a very nice and airy room for me, Just coming inside, on a small table I found a vase of roses----my favorite flower. I thanked them for their kindness. When they left me to take a rest, I really could not do it. My attention was taken away by the charming and picturesque scenery outside the window. If I were an artist, I would have drawn a wonderful picture of it.

Every morning we took a walk in the neighboring hills where we could enjoy the fresh air and sweet songs by the birds. We gathered wild flowers here and there among the bushes, I found it full of fun.

In the afternoon, I mostly sent my time reading and writing, for I was shut in the house by the terrible heat. The evening was shut in the house by the terrible heat. The evening was the only time we could go to swim together. I improved my swimming greatly during those two weeks.

Though the fortnight passed away at lightening speed, the memory of it will last forever.

2.My Summer Vacation-我的暑假生活

At college, I missed my parents a lot. As the term was drawing to an end, I eagerly looked forward to going home. And I planned to do a thousand and one things during the vacation. Above all, I wanted to help my mother with housework. I also wished to read many hooks which my teachers had recommended.

3.Summer Holiday 暑假

I like the summer holidy so much. I look forward to summer holiday every year. Last summer, I went to Shen zhen for my holiday, and it is also a city of seashore like Haikou. I enjoyed having a walk along the beach after supper or having a swim in the afternoon. The sky is blue, the air is clear. Wherever you go, You can always see the green trees, the neat grasses and the colourful flowers. They were really wonderful. Shen Zhen has a lot of tall buildings. And it is a modern city.

MY SUMMER VACATION

After the final examination, I received a letter from my uncle and aunt who invited me to stay with them for a fortnight. They live in the countryside near a beautiful mountain. The news brought me a restless night. Next morning, after almost a day's ride on the bus I reached their home and I was kindly received by them. They prepared a very nice and airy room for me, Just coming inside, on a small table I found a vase of roses----my favorite flower. I thanked them for their kindness. When they left me to take a rest, I really could not do it. My attention was taken away by the charming and picturesque scenery outside the window. If I were an artist, I would have drawn a wonderful picture of it.

Every morning we took a walk in the neighboring hills where we could enjoy the fresh air and sweet songs by the birds. We gathered wild flowers here and there among the bushes, I found it full of fun.

In the afternoon, I mostly sent my time reading and writing, for I was shut in the house by the terrible heat. The evening was shut in the house by the terrible heat. The evening was the only time we could go to swim together. I improved my swimming greatly during those two weeks.

Though the fortnight passed away at lightening speed, the memory of it will last forever.

Every morning,I get up at seven o'clock,and do some indoor-sports at nine o'clock.At twelve o'clock,I begin to have my lunch.In the afternoon,I swim at two. At five,I play football.Then,I have dinner at six.In the evening,I watch TV at eight,and do some reading at nine.At ten o'clock,I go to bed on time.

This is my happy day.

Peter is a middle school student.He likes reading books very much ,but he is very forgetful and doesn't take good care of his books .

He borrowed a storybook named David Copperfield from the school library two weeks ago.It was time for him to return the book,but he could't find it angwhere.He had to go to the school library and tell the librarian about it.The librarian told him that he had to pay for it if he could't find it.

As a student,we should love books and look after our books well.

Sunday,teachers and students go to the park to have a trip.They play near the river .Tom is flying a kite.Mary is reading a book with some pictures on it.The twins Lucy and lily are playing chess under the tree.There is a boat in the river.And there are two young men siting on the boat.they are fishing.they are students 'teachers.

Dear jane ,

i have read your letter. i think there are some points to keep healthy. first,we should do more exercises. second , make sure that everything is clean,especially your hands. third, we must cultivate good habit of daily life.

I will never forget somgthing.I had an exciting experience last Sunday.I took the bus to go home ,it was very crowded,it was full of people.Everyone was trying to move so that could get off.But a man was always standing in the middle.I thought he was strange.Suddenly,he put his hand into a woman's bag,and I noticed that he was a thief ! Then I told the woman about it .The woman was surprised and called the police.At last the thief was caught ,and I thought I did a good thing ,I was so happy.Helping others is great!

August 8, 2010 is really a good day to begin the Olympics! China will be shown by the whole world in Beijing Olympic Games on that day. In order to hold the Olympic Games, many facilities will be build. And I love the Olympic Swimming Center most because it’s beautiful.Let's all wish the best for the 2010 Olympic Games in Beijing.

【我的暑假生活英文日记范文】

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