英语作文我的乌龟
when i was two years old , my father bought two little turtles for me. i was very happy . now they are eight years old. their names are apple and watermelon.
look at them , they have small eyes and beautiful shells .they also have small tails. they live in the balcony .they like to eat small living fishes. so every sunday i buy a lot small living fishes for them. they play and walk together every day.
my turtles are lovely and clever. i love them. they are my good friends forever! do you like them? i think you like them too. welcome to my home to play with them.
【英语作文我的乌龟】
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