One day, my deskmate came to my house.I felt very happy.
We went to a restaurant.We ordered the day's specials.
Then we went to a park, we rode a bike there and we feeded some birds.
It's the dinner time.I helped my mother set the table,she felt soexcited.
It's really a good day.
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