Tom is a lazy student. He don’t have some good habit.And he don’t like doing much sport.He always says”wait a minute.”
His mother feels he is so lazy. One day she said”Poor Tom,you’re so lazy .”But Tom said”No mun,I’m not lazy.””Why?you don’t do much sport.And you don’t make your bed.”Tom’s mother was surprise.
“I like walking.”He said.”When I went to the dining room and had something to eat.”When Tom's mother heard this, she fainted on the spot.
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