I finished all my homework yesterday .So I was free in today. I got up late . Grandpa let me buy some gingers with grandma.But I didn’t want to go there on foot.Because I was lazy.I thought it was far from my home.
But I went there with Grandma.Today is May Day,so there were so many people in the street.There were so many cars on the road too.We crossed the road safely.
Then we entered the supermarket. We bought some gingers and many other things. Then we went home happily.
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