Thursday forth February
It was sunny in the morning.But I didn’t play.Because I had an English lesson. It was funny.I have lunch at twelve.In the afternoon,I had a Computer lesson.The teacher asked us some questions.I was late for the Maths lesson.I was good at it.In the evening,I went to the park.There was a hive.It was big and interesting.But I was afraid .So I ran away.
What a day！
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